"Thank you mam"

Mr Romero please grade me on my Transistions and Details

Have you ever read "Thank you mam"? Well i did, I liked it, you should read it. It takes place in Harlem yea, Harlem. My favorite part of the story was the conflict because there were a lot of them which i thought were exiting and the conflict was really simple.

The first conflict in the story "Thank you mam" is Man vs Man. It was Man vs Man because Roger tried to steel Ms LBWJ's pcketbook. Ms LBWJ stopped him, kicked him and picked him up to go to her house. A quote from the story "The large woman simply turned around and kicked him right square in his blue jeaned sitter. Them she reached down picked the boy up by his shirt front". 

 

The second conflict in the story "Thank you mam"that i liked was Man vs Self. Roger sat down and had a meal and a conversation with Ms LBWJ. He was thinking of running but he didnt, he wanted to lean something from Ms LBWJ. A quote from the story is "He coul make a dash for it down the hall! He could run,run,run,run"!!!!

Lastly the third conflict in "Thank you mam" is Man vs Fate. It was fate that Roger tried to steal a pocketbook that belonged to Ms LBWJ. It was fate that Ms LBWJ would baptise him, teach him and give him ten dollars which we the readers dont know what he was going to do with that money but we have a clue.

I really liked the story. You are thinking "Why should i read this story"? Well its been written by a famous writer, Lagston Hudges. So what???? You are missing a lot on a very interting story!!!!

NHD

The person that i chose was Alexander The Great. I chose Alexander because he was really interesting, he was a awesome ruler, he was greek, and he went half way to Asia! Thats why i chose Alexander the great!!

The war in Iraq

The war in Iraq is a major problem and i think that one candate is right. Barack Obama believes that the war in Iraq is not not nesesery. He will bring back some troops and and leave troops but not to fight. Also put some troops to Afganistan.Barack Obama did not sipport on going to war in Iraq. McCain wants the war in Iraq, he supported Bush on going to war in Iraq in 2002. He believes that we should stay there fight and when it is safe we leave. I suppport Barack Obama because lives can be saved. We arleady lost troops why lose more? I really feel that we arent supppose to be there. For what oil? hatred? what?We should leave there.  

I will graduate in 2012!

Mr Romero please grade me in my Voice And Introduction/Conclusion

Did you know that 40% of students are dropping out of high school before they even graduate?? I will not drop out ! I will graduate in 2012! because of my family, I will try my best and because i want to go college to get a education.

First of all, my family. If i dont graduate my mom will "kill" me. My dad helps me in math when I need help and my mom loves me, supports me, buys what ever i need and helps me when im in trouble or need help with something. They are the best parents!

Futhermore I will try my best. I will try my best, like do all my work, homework,study for tests and I will participate. I always do my work, I really want to graduate high school. I want to have a good education thats why I came to Constitution High school. I am really impressed with Constitution High school. We have our own goverment and much more. No high school has that, Im really lucky to come to this school.

Lastly, my college education. I want to go to college and become a lawyer. I alot of people are telling me "thats to hard" " You will never accomplish that " i dont listen to them, thats my dream! Do you imagine yourself in a court talking,arguing,and telling serious facts to defend your client? I like that . Thats my dream, i have potential. I want to go to college!!! During my college education I want ti learn more! Like American History and African American history.

Thats why I want to graduate in 2012! So what?? Well if you want to failor drop out of school, you might as well practice the phraze" Would you like fries with that?"

Why i came to Constitution HS?

I came to Constitution High School because i want to learn more about the American History because i am interasted in it. In middle school they didnt teach us anything about the American history.Its also a really organized school and the best part is that its 7 blocks away.I wante to come here so bad, and i did, im really glad Con HS accepted me.