I will graduate in 2012!

Mr Romero please grade me in my Voice And Introduction/Conclusion

Did you know that 40% of students are dropping out of high school before they even graduate?? I will not drop out ! I will graduate in 2012! because of my family, I will try my best and because i want to go college to get a education.

First of all, my family. If i dont graduate my mom will "kill" me. My dad helps me in math when I need help and my mom loves me, supports me, buys what ever i need and helps me when im in trouble or need help with something. They are the best parents!

Futhermore I will try my best. I will try my best, like do all my work, homework,study for tests and I will participate. I always do my work, I really want to graduate high school. I want to have a good education thats why I came to Constitution High school. I am really impressed with Constitution High school. We have our own goverment and much more. No high school has that, Im really lucky to come to this school.

Lastly, my college education. I want to go to college and become a lawyer. I alot of people are telling me "thats to hard" " You will never accomplish that " i dont listen to them, thats my dream! Do you imagine yourself in a court talking,arguing,and telling serious facts to defend your client? I like that . Thats my dream, i have potential. I want to go to college!!! During my college education I want ti learn more! Like American History and African American history.

Thats why I want to graduate in 2012! So what?? Well if you want to failor drop out of school, you might as well practice the phraze" Would you like fries with that?"

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